Talk:Rita, Sue and Bob Too
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[edit]- Rita's house, 1 Brafferton Arbor, at Churn Drive, Buttershaw, Bradford, West Yorkshire
- Sue's house, Westonby House, The Boulevard (latterly known as Westonby Court), at Ridings Way, Buttershaw, Bradford, West Yorkshire
- The Beacon pub, Reevy Road West, at The Crescent East, Buttershaw, Bradford, West Yorkshire; named after the Reevy Beacon, one of a chain of warning beacons, opened in 1969, closed in August 2016.
- Carleton House, Buttershaw, Bradford, West Yorkshire
- Buttershaw Comprehensive School (replaced with Buttershaw Business and Enterprise College), Reevy Road West, Buttershaw, Bradford, West Yorkshire
- Baildon Bridge Garage, Otley Road, Baildon, West Yorkshire
98.248.161.240 (talk) 13:16, 21 July 2024 (UTC)
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Hi, I'm Spectrallights. This comment is in regards to edits I made at Rita, Sue and Bob Too after copy editing. I removed the section you added about Marketing because it was a literal description of the images on the poster. There appears to be nothing significant or specific about the marketing that warrants its own section; i.e., the mullets on the poster don't appear to have been responsible for the film's success. WP:PARAGRAPH has more information on how to structure sections and paragraphs. If you think I made a mistake or have a question, you can message me on my talk page. Spectrallights (talk) User talk:98.248.161.240#c-Spectrallights-20240806071500-Rita, Sue and Bob Too |07:15, 6 August 2024 (UTC)
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the poster does not describe the film, that is the necessary point
I am glad you agree that this is a description. since the internet is text-based, a description is necessary in this case
Rita,_Sue_and_Bob_Too discussion is at Talk:Rita,_Sue_and_Bob_Too
it looks like you bowdlerized it, making the article a vague description
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